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The first haiku I wrote in my entire life

The Chicago Tribune published an article about the public art haikus appearing in CTA train stations. I was pleased that people's comments for this online article were mostly all haikus. So I wrote my own:

I like how seven
of the first eight comments are
some thoughtful haikus.


Posted by: spudart on Feb 07, 08 | 5:00 am | Profile
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can someone please explain to me the magic that is haiku? I have known a few cool people in my time who though haikus were the best. I need to be enlightened.

Posted by: unlikelymoose on Feb 07, 08 | 9:11 am


A haiku is just three lines. The first line has five syllables. The second line has seven syllables. The third line has five syllables. That's it.

At first I hated the haiku, cuz i thought there was some secret magic to it. But now in order to appreciate it, I just put it into another perspective in my mind. I frame it in the sense of that it's just a simple structure for any open idea. Kinda like an exercise in creativity. Start with one limit, and work within that limit.

Posted by: spudart on Feb 07, 08 | 9:14 am


I'm suprised by this. When I was at TMS I was part of a daily haiku exchange (I've embraced the haiku for most of my life) You must have really hated the poor haiku since you weren't a part of that and this is your first. Welcome to the land of haikus ... finally! ;O)

I was going to reply with a haiku, but my brain isn't working proper today.

Posted by: Tom on Feb 07, 08 | 12:28 pm


There was a daily haiku exchange at TMS? Whatthe!? How did I miss this?

For a second, I thought your last sentence was a haiku, and you were just being a wisenheimer.

Posted by: spudart on Feb 07, 08 | 12:57 pm


Japanese haiku are written as a tribute to Mother Nature.

Posted by: Gina on Feb 07, 08 | 8:17 pm


Before I’ve only heard the word haiku, now I know it already. Another collection of thoughts that I’ve learned today. Thank you.

Posted by: Ermar on Feb 08, 08 | 3:43 am


That is a cute haiku, not so much poetic but very clever. Haha. I would have never thought of that!

Posted by: Ronald on Feb 08, 08 | 6:31 am


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